Wednesday, 29 November 2017

E-Sting Evaluation-First Draft

E-Sting Evaluation


For my E-Sting i am happy about:
  • The lighting-it looks effective and had the effect I desired.
  • The creative concept and how it is visually appealing even though it is all made of sheets and cardboard.
I would like to improve:
  • It needs to be longer to fit the brief
  • It needs less movement as when I was filming it I moved around a lot which can be seen with jolted camera angles. 
  • Maybe more scenes? To see the astronaut come out and plant a flag on the E4 logo.
  • To see the logo for longer. 

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